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Seal of fate

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We were once ash and dust
In a world so unjust
The two of us born over and over
Feelings I once hoped dead
It was here that they led
We may finally get our closure
One can't forget what they saw
Such is the universe's law

Don't let it come, stop the night
Revive the dying light
You don't care but I always will
We are one but separate
Following dead etiquette
And this way our hearts remain still
The fate that I'm doomed to seek
Is re-enacting stories of antique

Will you look at me, heal the doubt
Grab my hand reaching out
'Cause this lovesickness hurts like cancer
A world of pain, world of loss
Proud, we carry the cross
No longer searching for the wrong answer
Though you hid the blood that you bled
The tragedy still stays in my head

Returned by time to earth's soil
Broken is my mortal coil
You kiss my lips now covered in white frost
You take my hand, cold as it is
Stiff with rigor mortis
Precious things tend to come at a cost
The rebellion of the pariah
Destroyed by a so called messiah

Once again ash and dust
Killed by a world void of trust
But now freed from the lives that we spited
Extinct is a blue bloodline
For your cold hand's in mine
In the next life we'll be reunited
Repeat but never reverse
That's the law of this universe
If I had a penny for every time I rewrote this, I'd have about a dollar. Or something. Point is, if I took the first draft and this final version and compared them, they only have a couple of similarities. So after a lot of rewriting and fine tuning, I decided it's ready to submit. Feedback is welcomed with open arms. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.
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ForeverMenou's avatar
I like it...It feels like a relationship that keeps continuing through reincarnations of different lives?