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Wounded, I came to you
to see what comfort I could find
But it never crossed my mind
that maybe you are wounded, too
Beneath that silver surface
You hide all your scars
And I just sit under these stars
wondering for what purpose
No, I show no concern
for I know there is much more
to how you shape the shore
and how the shore shapes you in turn
Despite your hurt I see the thrill
in your dark blue eyes
I can hear your bitter cries
as you pull me closer, still
I'm coming, oh, life's mother
I surrender to your mighty grace
Take me in your black embrace
and let us heal each other
to see what comfort I could find
But it never crossed my mind
that maybe you are wounded, too
Beneath that silver surface
You hide all your scars
And I just sit under these stars
wondering for what purpose
No, I show no concern
for I know there is much more
to how you shape the shore
and how the shore shapes you in turn
Despite your hurt I see the thrill
in your dark blue eyes
I can hear your bitter cries
as you pull me closer, still
I'm coming, oh, life's mother
I surrender to your mighty grace
Take me in your black embrace
and let us heal each other
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self-organized
the fatal attraction of civil mysticism and the ingenuity of the perfect aspect ratio fit me into my corner so I could cube myself and bloom under pressure never ending as expected new cubbyholes to place in my belly filled with grief and relief for the mes no one wants to see.
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Vulnerability
i) I tread
light
bright
buoyant
on an ocean
of apologies;
don't come
too close,
you'll drown.
ii) I want to be
your perfect little girl -
I will hide
the shame
under my fingernails
(just like
you taught me)
and smile the smile
that shines in your face
and breaks
down my throat.
iii) I want to be
your perfect partner -
I will remold
and remold
and remold
and remold;
I unmake myself
in your image.
iv) I want to be
your perfect friend -
I will give
every inch
to you
and cry
behind my hands
for every inch
you pull
away.
v) My body
shakes my bones loose
with every syllable
I do not swallow.
Yoy are not safe,
I am not safe.
Pull you
Literature
cycle.
(birth.)
i walk home, crisp shoelaces, bloodied nose
middle of autumn, frothing at the mouth
kids took summer skin too far, brought on apocalypse
i tell myself it will be over soon, wintertime freckles
will be here
incensed
(childhood.)
stove milk and delicate murmurs
the technicolor alphabet teaches itself
purple bowls with animal faces
hospital bracelets around tiny wrists
won’t come loose
mama
(adolescence.)
the clouds are gasoline, wisps of gin, addicted
there is vomit on the floor, new candy sores
sky is burning, orange with hungry flame, vying
i don’t know who to talk to, crying
let me go
alive
(adulthood.)
doctor
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Wrote this for because the theme of the week is the ocean. I rarely do these theme of the week things, because I'm too slow at writing. Though this was faster, since I find the sea very inspirational, and I live in a former harbor town. Not too difficult to walk down to the shore and let it inspire.
Also tried a new rhyme scheme, abba. Don't know how that worked out. I like it though and I hope you like it too
Also tried a new rhyme scheme, abba. Don't know how that worked out. I like it though and I hope you like it too
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Nicely done.